Picture of the Week!
Our picture of the week has quadrupled!
I am giving you 4 pictures of the week this week.
We are learning how to write opinions and we are going to apply that to our
picture of the week this week.
Look at the following photographs that show each of the 4 seasons.
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| Fall |
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| Spring |
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| Summer |
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| Winter |
STUDENTS: Which season of the year is your favorite?
I want you to give reasons and evidence to support your opinion.
I expect you to write more than one sentence.
In my comments though, I will just be focusing on your
opinion since that is what we are
focusing on this week in English.
See you at the edge- Mrs. Shelby
My favorite is winter and you can make snow mans and throw snow balls and also you get to go snow boarding winter is fun. By Lizzie
ReplyDeleteYour reasons are very good. Next time, let's work on making this into more than one sentence. When you have a new thought, make a new sentence. When you write your opinion sentence, stay away from "my favorite".
DeleteNext time ill try to make more than one sentence. And if i have anthor idea ill make a new sentence. By Lizzie Porter.
DeleteI think spring is the best season because the pretty flowers bloom and the sun is shining.My brother,sister, and me jump on the trampolen at our house.By Zoe
ReplyDeleteI love spring as well! Next time, stay away from the words "I think" when you are writing your opinion statement. Good reasons, Zoe!
DeleteI love Spring too! Though you said "MY brother,sister and me"when the correct word is I instead of me.I also like th looming flowers. Alex Vires
DeleteWinter is my favorite season because their is snow and it is cold and I like cold. I could have a snowball fight and we get an extra sleep because the clock fall back.
DeleteI like fall. like fall because its not hot or cold and that's why. By jerric
ReplyDeleteStay away from the words "I like" in your opinion statement. Try to come up with more than one reason to support your opinion.
DeleteSORRY By JERRIC
DeleteMy favorite season is fall because we pile up leaves and jump in them and its thanks giveing.I also like to find squirels in the fall.nathan
ReplyDeleteRemember, we do not use the word "becasue" in our opinion statement. We also don't need to use the words "my favorite". You have very good reasons!
DeleteMrs.Shelby next time I will try to not to wright ''because'' or ''my favorite''.Nathan
DeleteI like fall to!!! By Jerric
DeleteMy favorite season is Winter .This is why it is Christmas time soon.I love Christmas because you get presents and toys and your elf comes. By: Mackenzie
ReplyDeleteChristmas is the reason I like winter as well! Next time, work on not using the words "my favorite" when you write your opinion statement.
DeleteOk Mrs.Shelby I will not write"my favorite "at the begining of a sentece
DeleteMy favorite season is Summer,because it is warm and not cold I also like the green leaves. I LOVE SUMMMMEEEERR!!!!!! COLTON
ReplyDeleteI am so glad you like summer so much. Next time, stay away from the words "my favorite" in your opinion statement.
Deletesorry by colton
DeleteI feel like winter is the best season.Winter is so butiful.Winter is the best season because you get to sit down and wach T.V.You can drink hot chouclet.That is whywinter is the best season.by:Hallie
ReplyDeleteGOOD JOB bY ALEX J
DeleteGood job, Hallie! I love all of your reasons. Great conclusion statement!
DeleteMy favorite Holiday is winter because of the snow and ice and snowball fight. by Nate
ReplyDeleteNext time, stay away from "my favorite" and "becasue" in your opinion statement. You need more than one reason to support your opinion.
DeleteFall is my favorite season. It is fun to jumping in the leaves. It is pretty in the fall when the leaves fall.
ReplyDeleteform Connor
DeleteI really like when the leaves fall as well. It is very pretty. Next time, don't use the words "my favorite" in your opinion statement.
DeleteWinter because you can make a snowman. I think winter is a good season for a snow ball fight people love to. Make snowmans each winter. By:Ashlyn Trice Nov.2
ReplyDeleteYou need to make sure you restate the prompt in your statement. Your readers aren't sure what you are talking about in the first sentence.
DeleteWinter is my favrite season because the snow on the trees is butifule .Anothere reason i like winter is you get to play in the snow
ReplyDeleteby ALEX JONES
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In your opinion statement, stay away from the words "my favorite". Good reasons to support your opinion.
Deletewinter is snowy and wite.winter is awsome and cold
DeleteBY ALEX JONES
Winter is the best season. In Winter you can play in the snow.Also you can drink hot chocolate.The snow is butifulle. In Winter you can build a snowman.
DeleteBy AlexJones
I think winter is the best. I think winter should be everybody's favorite season I think winter is the best.
ReplyDeleteBy Andrew
DeleteAndrew,you did not read because you did not support your opinion with reasons and evidence. Cian
DeleteAndrew, you need to start over. You did not use reasons and evidence to support your opinion.
DeleteMy favorite season is Fall because me and my sister jump in leves . Its so fun . And when its cold outside we get to drink hot choclet.
ReplyDeleteAnd that's why I think that FALL IS THE BEST SEASON!!!!!!!!!! Jalyn Huddleston
These are very good reasons to support your opinion. Next time, stay away from the words "my favorite" and "becasue" in your opinion statement.
DeleteI like Fall. Its so fun.Some times in Fall ,me and my sister play in leves.And if its cold outside we go inside and drink hot
Deletecoco. And that is why I think that FALL IS THE BEST SEASON!!!1!!!!!!!!!! jalyn
My faverot seson is winter it is very pretty with the white snow and the Cardnals. We get to make snow mans and play snowball fight. That is why winter is my faverot seson.Lillian
ReplyDeleteYour reasons are very good. However, you should stay away from the words "my favorite" in your opinion statement. Check your spelling as well. Make sure you make a new sentence when you have a new thought.
DeleteWinter is the best the best season. It is very petty with the white snow and the ice hanging from the trees. I like all the fun stuff you can do in the winter, you can make snow mans and play snowball fight. That is why I love winter.Lillian
DeleteWinter is best season you get to watch t.v and drink hot choclate and play in the snow and make snow angles .by Timothy
DeleteMy favorite season is winter because you can make snowman. And you can drink hot chocolate. And you can go sledding. You can have a snow ball fight. You can watch T.V. You can go snowboarding. And you can sleep. In conclusion that is why I think winter is the best season.
ReplyDeleteBy Dominick
Stay away from the words "my favorite" and "becasue" in your opinion statement. Never start a sentence with the word "and". Good reasons to support your opinion.
DeleteI like winter you get to make snowman. You get to drink hot chocolate. You get to go sledding. You can have a snow ball fight. You can watch T.V. You can go snowboarding. Finally you can sleep. In conclusion that is why I like winter.
DeleteBy Dominick
very good dominick but state your opinon a little MORE!!!!!!! GOOD THOUGH BY BRENNAN
DeleteMy favorite season is Winter because of christmas. You spend time with family. Sleding together with friends. Winter is my most favorite season.
ReplyDelete:)Cian Mc Cain Barber(:
you did a good paragraph but you spelled sledding wrong by BRENNAN
DeleteDo not use the words "My favorite" and "becasue" in your opinion statement. Good reasons to support your opinion.
DeleteWinter is the best season of all four seasons. You drink hot coaco. And you go sledding with your family and/or friends. You make snomen. You have snowball fights with fortresses made of snow. Winter...is...the...best...season of all the seasons!!! Cian Mc Cain Barber :) :) :) :)
DeleteMy faforite season is summer because it is very hot. You can play outside all day long. the flowers are out. You can also swim. summer is very fun. that's why I think summer is the best!!!
ReplyDeleteby brennan
DeleteBrennan you did a good paragraph. But you spelled favorite wrong. It is favorite.
DeleteBy Dominick
Do not use the words "My favorite" and "becasue" in your opinion statement. Good reasons to support your opinion.
DeleteI think I like Fall the best because, you can FALL into leaves and I was born in fall. I don't care I like fall !!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteBy Wyatt Shirley
Do not use the words "I think" and "because" in your opinion statement. At the end, you said "I don't care." This sentence does not support why you think fall is the best season. This sentence should not be in here.
DeleteI'm sorry mrs. Shelby I will do better by Wyatt Shirley
DeleteI like winter because, I like to play in the snow. And I was born in the winter. by Jaelin walker
ReplyDeleteTry to stay away from the words "I like" in your opinion statement. Also, don't start a sentence with the word "and".
DeleteI will do better next time
DeleteI thank winter is the best because I was born in winter. I like to play in the snow. I love winter!!!!!!
DeleteBy Jaelin Walker
DeleteI thank summer is the best because its hot and it is not cold or rainy but i love summer it has birds out for summer and bees and cats and dogs i love summer it is the best.morgan heaton
ReplyDeleteTry to stay away from the words "I think" in your opinion statement. You have to make this into more than 1 sentence. Every time you start a new thought, you have to put a period and start a new sentence.
DeleteI think winter is the best because you can make snow men you get a whole week out of school. timothy
ReplyDeleteWhen you write your opinion statement, stay away from the words "I think" and "becasue"
DeleteSpring is the best season of the year! There are so many different colors of flowers blooming. It is like everything comes back to life after the long, cold winter. Spring is a great time to play outside with my friends and family. Spring is the most wonderful time of the year!
ReplyDeleteGreat Job Mrs.Shelby with your reasons.
DeleteSpring is the greatest season of the year! I just love the way you can go outside and feel the warm sun after the long, dull winter! The beautiful flowers start to bloom in beautiful colors! The wonderful temperature to go and play in the warm sun. Running through the fields, reading in the sun, and taking long strolls in the evening are all things you can do in the spring! Do you love spring? Alex Vires
ReplyDeleteFall is the best season.Because I like to jump in the leaves.I like the crisp Fall air.I LOVE FALL!!!!!!!! BY OLIVER.
ReplyDeleteSUMMER!!!!! You can run around in the grass, pick flowers, go outdoors like ALL the time. You can also sit outdoors and read a book. Another reason I LOVE Summer is that you get to... SWIM!!!!!!! There is a million bijillion things you could do in the Summer. Do you like Summer the best? By Mckenzie A
ReplyDeleteWinter is my best season.You can throw snowballs at each other.You can also build a snowman with a big snow ball,a small snowball,and a large snowball.By Peyton
ReplyDeleteFall is the best season. It is pretty when the leaves fall. You can play in them. Connor
ReplyDeleteWinter is my favrite holiday. I like to throw snowballs,snowagels and sleing. I like to go slidiIing down the hill.I like to throw snow balls at my sister.I like to get on the floor and make a snow angels. by Nate
ReplyDeleteSummer is the best season ever. You get to swim in your pool or you can go to the beach or get wet with water holes. The sunshine is so beautiful in the summer summer is so fun & you get go to the water park!!!!!!!! By: Ashlyn Trice Nov.3
ReplyDeleteGood job Ashlyn I am proud of you and your paragraph! Emily Anne Kogos
DeleteFall is the best season and the reason why it is the best and the reason is that you can rake up all the leaves and you can jump in the leaves and another reason is that you can have hot milk and you can also have fun with your pets and you can just have fun. And that is why Fall is the best season. Emily Kogos
ReplyDeleteNice reasons Emily by Brady
DeleteSummer is my favorite season ever!!! You can swim and play all day. That is why I love summer
ReplyDeleteNext time put your name. Emily & Lillian
Deletesummer is the best season ever. you can run around . you can even go swimming on hot days. SSSSSUUUUUMMMMEEEEERRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IS ASOME .
ReplyDeleteYou spelled awesome wrong and next time put your name please. Emily Anne Kogos
DeleteSUMMER is the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You can swim and ustuly there are a lot of BITHDAY PARTYS!!!!!!!!!!!! BY Elijah
ReplyDeleteI like fall because my birthday is in fall. Also you can rake leaves into a pile, then jump in it. it is always is fun for me. but it takes a long time to rake it into a pile.
ReplyDeleteBy Wyatt Sirley
hay don't say Like. sloan
DeletePlease put capital letters on the 1st letter of a sentence. Lillian & Emily k
Deletesummer is the best season ever my family had pigs and cattle this summer.
ReplyDeleteSSSSSSSSSSUUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRR IS THE BEST !
BY:Sloan
Fall is the best. You get out for a whole week.
ReplyDeleteI like winter because I like snow.And because you get to make snow angles.Also you can play in a bunch of snow.And also I love winter.Kellie Haase
ReplyDeleteMy favorite season is spring. I like spring because I can play with my brothers. I can work in my grandmas garden and help my grandpa work. It is very fun . This is why I like spring. By Brady
ReplyDeleteI love Spring. Spring has many flowers and sun shine. also flowers are very pretty too. I love Spring because I get to pick flowers. That is why I love Spring so much. Demi Stoll
ReplyDeleteI love summer because you get swim and have party's. Especially the cook outs. There are so many highlights to summer. you can take off your shoes and run through the field. These are some examples why I love summer! Anna Kate
ReplyDeleteWinter is my favort season.Winter is my favort season because you can make snow men and snow balls.You can have snow because it falls out of the sky.That is why I like winter the best.By;Jonathhan
ReplyDeleteI love SUMMER because it,s my birthday and i get to play minecraft with my YOLO ax.
ReplyDeleteI love spring because you get to smell the petty flowers and you also get to play in the petty flowers.
ReplyDeleteWinter is best to me. i love this season than others.
ReplyDeleteschool classes
Spring is my favorite. in spring I play in the sun. and chill inside. spring is my favorite because spring is pretty. in spring I also have school. and school is fun. in school I read and write. some examples are in spring I play outside outside we play nerf war in spring we usaluy go to my uncle Bobbys at uncle Bobbys we swim. at home I chill and play my Wii. my favorite is spring. in conclusion I love spring.by:Cameron
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